Week 4

Group CRIT

Feedback

  • The typeface for the deer antlers looks really effective but explore how I can develop it further; go back and revisit the week and see if I can make the antlers appear more ‘realistic’ i.e. they wouldn’t be sitting on the line and the composition could be pushed further to represent misshapen antlers lying on the ground.
  • My group really liked the moon editorial, with the meteor lettering and thought it looks really effective on the black background. I said this was my favourite as I really enjoyed that week and I wonder if I could experiment more with separating the text from the images (the circles) to minimise the amount of objects on the pages? If I have time I want to explore this.